This track strats off pretty raw. Not alot of padding or effects used to limit the canned sounds of the instruments.<br/><br/>I get the feeling that the "focal" point is the vocals, which is just fine... but a painting is only as good as the canvas. <br/><br/>Meaning, if fades & FX were used on the music bed you lay your vocals over, you would have a much better resonance. <br/><br/>Vocally, you could do better with some variation on the refrain. The "you Knooooooow" parts where you extend your vocals are flat. The Vocoder you run in the background is a very nice touch & adds spice to the track. <br/>I think with some re editing & proper placement you got a really killer song to show for your efforts of labor. <br/>Soild 3 with the hopes you understand what I am tryying to say to you as constructive & not destructive criticisim.


